Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Time's Crisis [Chapter 6]

Hello. 'Tis be Plippy, and out of complete boredom, I chose to make a fan fiction. Now, if you indeed know this name, I shall introduce myself as Red’s Surfing Pikachu. Although now I’ll just drop that name for a bit, 'nuff said.

So let’s get right down to introducing a new character who is quite smart, and gets pretty hax when it’s battle time. Oh, and she’s even more haxxed up than Char in battle, before I get anywhere.

Intoducing Kori, the blue Eevee!

Now, let’s get down to this. the story starts off with a person obtaining a letter, indicating the destruction of the world. He/she loses the letter to the wind, and Kori finds it. And it looks like she’s about to get into a crazy adventure!

Now, this time, I will review applications INCREDIBLY CLOSE. First off, I’ll need someone to lose the letter. At that point, I will let any suitable applications join.

Name:
Pokemon:
Attacks:
Personality:
Bio:

And there you have it.

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[spoilerProlouge:345ab84j]Prolouge - Celestrial Letter?

It was quite a cool night. A chilly, windy, night.

Nick the Charizard was walking across the grass, surrounded by homes of other Pokemon. You could say he was taking a walk. That"s when, a paper blew onto and hit his face hard. “Ow!” Nick yelled painfully. He grabbed the paper off. He began to read it, and it turned out to be a letter. “Dear reader. I would like to inform you what is currently happening in the great universe beyond. Whomsoever finds this letter in the end will end up saving us. As you may know, there was an incident one year ago in which a time portal project was started. The result ended in failure, and, unbeknownst to all, time began to slowly fall into the darkness. A year later, time has already gone out of place. As foretold, you will read this letter at 10 PM.” Nick looked around. “Oh…!” he said in suprise. There was a tower with a clock on it that said 10:00 PM. Nick continued reading. “Look to your left now.” Nick did so and he saw smoke rising. “Next, walk 10 steps ahead of you with you eyes closed.” Nick once again did as so, and he slipped on an inconveniently placed banana peel. He slid a bit on the ground, and while trying to get back up, steps on an also inconveniently placed bar of soap, and he began to slide backwards on it. Nick fell off it and landed into a lake. Getting one glimpse of the letter again before falling in, he saw the last words. “You will now lose this letter.” The letter blew away, and Nick splashed into the lake. He looked back up to see the letter float away. Nick jumped up and began to fly torwards the letter in hopes of catching it. Suddenly, the writing on the letter was altered. “You will be owned now.” Then, a rock that was unluckily thrown into the air by something smashed into Nick, sending him flying to the ground. Getting back up, he spoke. “That letter… it"s not ordinary; not even close to that. And it likes to pwn people… what was the word? Oh, yes.” Nick began to scream. “EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEBILLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL!!!”

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[spoilerChapter 1:345ab84j]Chapter 1 - Instant Resort:
Well, here we are. In a little arena, Kori is almost backing down from a challenge against her friend, who is evolved. Her friend is indeed, a Flareon. “Come on~!” the Flareon said, annoyed. “I just evolved, can I at least do a battle against you~?” The Flareon was getting more and more cranky. “Uhmmm, okay… I guess… I will.” Kori said sheepishly. She went into a battle position, and so did the Flareon. It turns out the Flareon"s name was Eon. “Fire…” the Flareon began. Kori began getting nervous, and her guard fell. “BLAST!!” the Flareon exclaimed as at the moment Kori let her guard down, she shot five rapid embers around Kori. Kori was thrown into the middle of them, and couldn"t move. A second later, the embers burst and became a star of great fire. Once the attack ended, Kori fell to the ground. She rolled torwards Eon and stopped. “Hello!” Kori said. Eon didn"t respond, instead chanting out the words “Flamethrower”. She let loose a great burst of flame, but when the attack ended, Kori was on Eon"s head. “Last Resort~!!” Kori yelled out for attack. She exploded with a great red energy, sending Eon flying up into the air. She landed back down in a small crater. “Oops, should I rush you to the center…?” Kori said nervously. “I"m fine, fine…” Eon said as she got back up, wobbly. “How"d you do that, though?” Eon asked, curious as to how Kori could pull off a Last Resort so early in a battle. “My only 2 moves are Substitute and Last Resort~!” Kori said happily. She skipped off across the grass, when the wind blew a paper onto her face…

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[spoilerChapter 2:345ab84j]Chapter 2 - Rapid Evolution!

Kori grabbed the paper. It was suprisingly written in Unown, but Kori could read this. She was able to make out the word “TEST”. “…huh?” Kori said in confusion. Then, Kori realized she wasn"t in the grass fields around Poke Town anymore. She was in what looked like a portal, and there was a seemingly invisible ground, which Kori was standing on. She looked around, and saw that it had gone dark. She suddenly jumped back. “EEEK!” she screamed, as the darkness had turned into thousands of eyes. The darkness slowly enveloped her, and she tried a Last Resort, but it didn"t effect the odd ball with no light. Kori was suddenly squeezed, as she realized the dark object she was in was solid. She was slowly getting crushed. That"s when, Kori teleported. The darkness broke out into what turned out to be thousands of Unown. They all looked down at a blue Espeon that had appeared. That"s when, the Espeon transformed into a Jolteon and used Thunder on each and every one of the Unown. They all fell, but then came back up. They used Hidden Power, and they shot out energy blasts of all different colors. The Jolteon turned back into an Eevee, and it used Last Resort. This Eevee… was Kori. The Last Resort sent the colors springing back torwards all the Unown, sending them flying down to the ground. The paper Kori was still able to hang on to suddenly changed its message. Kori made out the Unown words, “AIRCHAR”. A Charmander appeared next to Kori. Kori was startled and kicked the Charmander straight into the air. It fell back down onto the ground. The Charmander folded his arms, giving Kori a nice opening for attack. Kori changed into a Vaporeon and used Hydro Pump. Kori realized the Charmander wasn"t there anymore, and cancelled the attack. She suddenly fell to the ground with punctures into her skin. She felt something stab her and she coughed blood. She jumped with a glint in her eye and kicked the air behind her. She struck the same Charmander she had been fighting. The Charmander was blown onto the invisible ground, and Kori also hit the ground. She checked for the stab wound, but to her suprise, it wasn"t even there. The Charmander had an odd look on his face, and Kori suddenly realized that she was in pain. The Charmander suddenly folded his arms, and Kori fell to the ground in a heart attack. She transformed into an Umbreon, but was losing conciousness. Kori began fading as her shadow extended to the Charmander. The Charmander didn"t notice this. Kori fell unconcious at the moment her shadow touched the Charmander"s. The Charmander suddenly fell, leaving both of them there, inside that odd dimension.
Kori woke up three days later, on the grass. The Charmander was there too, but he seemed different. The Charmander started complaining. “Stupid Unowns… next time they even go near me, I"ma roast them…” he said. Kori poked at the Charmander. The Charmander noticed, and turned around. “Hello.” the Charmander said. He picked up a paper. “Is this yours?”, he asked. Kori nodded and took the paper. It now said “PASS” in Unown. “Hey, you need help getting somewhere, by any chance?” the Charmander began. “Well, to the center of Poke Town, but I"ll be safe by myself.” Kori replied. “No, I"m not accompanying you. I"m just going to do this.” the Charmander said as he stood up. He snapped his fingers, and Kori found herself at the center of Poke Town…

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[spoilerChapter 3:345ab84j]Chapter 3: There is No Such Thing as Convenience in the World of Espionage
Kori, confused as to how she suddenly got there, began to head home. Later on, on the way, she began wondering. (I wonder what that paper was all about…) she thought. Then, she heard a crack, and noticed the daytime had been replaced with thunderclouds. “Whoa, that was sudden.” Kori said while glaring out to the clouds. Except… the clouds were quite active! White pupil-less eyes glared out from the clouds. “Wh-what is that!?” Kori began to get scared. A bunch of Poke Town citizens came rushing to Kori"s location, curious as to what was going on with the odd thunderclouds. Then, a figure flew straight out of the clouds! The yellow-black wings were shown, and the cause of the thunderclouds was revealed to be a Zapdos; one of the three legendary Pokemon of the bird trio. “How… inconvenient.” a Charizard revealed himself from the crowd. And then, an Elekid too. And then a Buizel. Then as for the last Pokemon that went to the front, was the Charmander who had fought and eventually assisted Kori. “Hey-hey-hey Ivaan.” the Charizard nodded to the Buizel. “Do you think an Ice Beam should be enough?” he asked. “Sure, it"s worth a try…” the Buizel, who"s name was Ivaan responded. Ivaan gathered the cold in his body to his throat, and began forming it into an energy beam. “Ice Beam!” Ivaan yelled as the beam of light-blue light was shot at the Zapdos. However, the Zapdos managed to dodge it. “No you don"t!” the Charmander flicked his hand, and the Ice Beam was rebounded back torwards the Zapdos. “This should be effective enough…” the Charizard said as rocks began flying up besides him. With a flap of his wings, the rocks were sent flying torwards Zapdos. “Feel a Rock Slide, Zapdos… and I hope you enjoy it~!” the Charizard taunted. Zapdos performed a barrel roll and the two attacks ran into eachother, causing the rocks to freeze upon contact with the Ice Beam. “D-darnit!” Ivaan said. A Snorunt came out of the crowd and began to assist. “Avalanche!” she yelled, and a huge amount of snow came from her mouth, straight torwards Zapdos. Zapdos flapped its wings and managed to dodge. Zapdos released a thunderbolt from the clouds, forcing everyone to jump for cover. As the thunderbolt hit the ground, several people fell down. An Elekid sat up, and attacked. “Thunderbolt!” he yelled weakly, as a small bolt of lightning was sent flying at Zapdos. Zapdos, instead of dodging it, took in the energy. Kori looked around. “Why you…” she said as she turned into a Glaceon. “Ice Beam!” she yelled as a beam of energy came from her mouth. Except this time, the beam bended all around Zapdos, and then finally rised up into the sky, enlarged itself, and fell down on Zapdos in a meteor-like fashion. At that point, the Zapdos exploded. “What the…!?” the Charmander exclaimed, confused. A paper fell from the sky where Zapdos blew up. Most people paid attention to the paper, but the 6 who fought glared at the spot where the explosion occoured. The Charmander pushed his hand forward, and the smoke vanished. What theysaw for a second… was something like a portal. But what could it possibly be? “Whoa… did you see that!?” the Charmander turned around and said. “Yeah, I did.” the Charmander said. Then, they all turned around to Kori. “Hey, thank you~!” the Charizard said. “My name is Nick~!” he began saying meekly. The Charmander went over and said. “I remember you… I think I forgot to give you my name. It"s Char. Char Flamesong.” he said. He began running backwards, waving his hands. The Buizel stepped forward and said “My name"s Ivaan, very nice to meet you.”, and then stepped back. The Elekid didn"t move, he just said his name to be “Rai”. Then, the Snorunt did the same, just saying to everyone that her name was “Koops”. “H-hello…” Kori said shyly. “My name is Kori… nice to meet you all.” she said. Then, one of the Pokemon in the crowd said “Hey, look at that!” while looking at the paper. Kori, Ivaan, Char, Nick, Koops, and Rai rushed over. “The paper… changed again.” Nick and Kori said at the same time. Then they stared at each other. “You"ve seen this paper?” Nick asked. “Yeah, and it cuased me quite some trouble.” Kori replied. “Henh, me too.” Nick said. The paper said “There is no such thing as convenience in the world of espionage.”…

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[spoilerChapter 4:345ab84j]Chapter 4 - The Secret of the Rapid Evolution

Staring down at the paper, Kori sighed. Ivaan turned torwards Kori with an interested look. “Kori, how"d you change into Glaceon and back, anyway?” Ivaan asked. “It"s an ability called Rapid Evolution… when one can store the necessary energies needed to evolve and command them at will as to either send them flowing through your body, restore them, and so.” Kori began to explain. “So… what would happen if you released two energies at the same time?” Ivaan asked, in an odd manner. “Uh-uh.” Kori began. “Impossible. One can only release an energy at a time.” Char began to tug at his scarf. The scarf began emmitting an aura, which caused the current protagonists (Kori, Nick, Ivaan, Rai, Koops, and Char) to glare at it. Char grabbed an orb out of his bag and wrapped the scarf around it, causing the aura to stop. “Ehh, what was that?” Nick carefully asked. Char blinked, unresponsive. “Whatever.” Nick just ignored him. “Kori, could you explain how you obtained the power to control these energies?” Ivaan began once more quesitoning Kori. Kori tipped her head torward Ivaan and began to speak. “I saw a red puddle outside and thought it was filled with Fruit Punch when I was little. And I drank it. Little did I know until later that it wasn"t Fruit Punch (though it actually DID taste like it), but a melted ice cream made from making ice cream out of Fire Stones, Water Stones, Thunderstones, Mossy Rocks, Frozen Rocks… and the ice cream was huge, you see. And it melted… so yeah.” Kori began to tell a childish story. “Kori, are you sure what you just said wasn"t out of a little children"s book?” Ivaan asked, the look on his face priceless. “No, because I"m the one who made the ice cream myself~!” Kori began saying cheerfully. “Did you have ANY idea what you PUT in there?!” Ivaan began yelling. “…err, no.” Kori muttered just enough for Ivaan to hear, ears drooping. “I thought it was rock salt.” Kori began to mutter again. Nick, who was listening, flipped towards Kori and began scolding her. “THAT WAS A PRETTY DANGEROUS MISTAKE, KORI! YOU–” Nick suddenly stopped as Kori had switched to Umbreon with a murderous look on her face. “Speak like that to me much more, and I"ll be happy to end you.” Kori began saying in a tone that assured how serious she was about doing it. Nick laughed. “Right, like an Umbreon is gonna-” Kori opened her eyes wide suddenly and called out the move Death Gambit. Nick winced, but then chuckled. “I have more health than you, so it"s not gonna work…” he muttered. Kori fell to the ground, but at the same time, Nick did. A second after, Kori blinked and jumped back up. Char glanced at Nick, attempting to remember what Kori had pulled off on him. He had realized that it was the same technique Kori used on himself to end their controlled battle in a draw; the attack Destiny Bond. “Jeez Kori, you"re lucky you didn"t actually kill him.” Char said, eyes twitching. “It was a mere Death Gambit, it cannot cause the death of one… unless under specific conditions.” Kori began saying, but her voice was completely different. Char noticed this. “Kori, are you… okay?” he asked. “No, I am in no need of any help…” Kori responded. This proved Char"s theory correct with the change of her choice of words; she was almost a completely different personality in a time of stress. Rai looked on with a look of shock on his face. “Hey, Kori… can we continue our battle, but this time, fairly?” Char asked. “Sure, I don"t mind… after all, this is a perfect spot for a small fray.” Kori replied.

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[spoilerChapter 5:345ab84j]Chapter 5: Since When Are Guns Legal?
Kori took a stance. Char began to think. Kori then dashed towards Char before he had time, and headbutted him. “Starter attack. It can throw in fixes, y"know.” Kori said conceitedly. Char stumbled back, noting he"d forgotten to turn on his air shield. Nick had gotten back up and was also watching. Char jumped up incredibly high and attempted to use the move Flamethrower, but nothing happened. “Huh?” Char blinked for a second. “I told you the first move could fiiix!” Kori yelled up cheerfully. “Nnh… you did something with that headbutt.” Char began to get somewhat annoyed. “Okay then… Vacuum-cut!” Char announced before sending several air waves towards Kori"s direction. The air waves vanished soon, though. “Eh… huh.” Char got more annoyed and tried to float in the air using airbending… but he started falling. “Wha–!?” Char then tried to teleport, and failed. “What did you do with that headbutt?!” Char yelled while falling. Kori giggled before saying. “You think you"re still in full condition… that headbutt caused very serious damage, but you don"t think it. Why? Because I also decided to hit a specific point that connects to your nerve.” “W-w…” Char realized and was suprised that this was the first time he had been outsmarted THAT much, much more actually defeated in battle. Char landed with a thud, and was barely concious before attempting to say something. “Clear my theory… do you… have two personalities? you sound so much different when you"re stressed…” Char began breathing heavily. “No.” Kori replied. “I may use a very different tone… and that is also because of my energy reserves. The same reason I can use Rapid Evolution. Energy increases don"t just mean in strength, but in intelligence aswell.” Kori explained. Kori then began to whisper. “You know the ice cream story I told Ivaan was fake, right? I mean seriously, making ice cream like that wouldn"t be possible, much less edible.” “…huh.” Char said. He had a fast recovery time, so Char got back up. “Sorry, but the battle ain"t over.” Char said before drawing a pistol to Kori"s head. “I"m not shooting bullets with this thing unless I have to.” Char muttered. Kori was in shock. She tried to Tail Whip the gun, but Char then shot the unloaded pistol and it send Kori flying backwards. “This pistol is quite explosive.” Char said clearly enough for all to hear, before shooting it, which sent a flaming blast of air at Kori. Kori wasn"t able to dodge that due to still being (barely) stunned, so she got hit back again. Kori turned into Espeon in the middle of being thrown through the air and landed gracefully on her feet. She proceeded to use Shadow Ball on the gun. “My gun shoots things very fast, so you probably can"t dodge this.” Char aimed the pistol again and shot. But Kori sidestepped to evade the attack. Char winced. “How… did… you…” he started blinking. Kori turned back into an Eevee. Char then loaded the pistol. “The distance between me and you… means that you won get much pain inflicted from this cheaply made bullet. However, if it spins, you will be penetrated, though barely. But the rotation is enough to send you unconcious.” Char announced before firing the gun. Kori immediately attepted to catch the bullet, and seemed to fail, but she revealed a somewhat bloody hand with the bullet in it. Char seemed to recognize this skill in one of his friends, Green the green Quilava (though he could do it faster), and himself. The watchers were watching, jaw dropped, eyes wide. “I know… when I"ve been outclassed.” Char spoke out. He stowed the gun away under his scarf. “No, I was the one being outclassed. But you never revealed it.” Kori spoke out. “Your scarf… I know what it"s made out. When I headbutted you, I analyzed your iventory. You have a magic scarf, a pistol that can fire energy bullets, and a billhook on your back that is suprisingly very light, yet a force to be reckoned with.” Char had no comment. Ivaan began to talk. “That was… that was just pro.” he said. However, the instant he finished talking, the sky seemed to make a cracking noise, and a portal opened in the sky. Out came a pretty big and firey bird. Legendary Pokemon: Moltres!

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[spoilerChapter 6:345ab84j]Chapter 6 - Dancing Flames
“…my gosh, that"s a big bird.” Rai was probably the first to speak out, though it is unknown among the crowd of many who looked up
“It"s not just your average big bird, it"s a Moltres. And apparently, it"s agitated in the same way as that Zapdos.” Kori spoke. “But why…?” she muttered, pondering.
Char appeared to be thinking the same thing, but he already had a theory in mind from past experiences. “Perhaps… hypnosis?” he said.
Nick turned around, and glared at the sheet of paper which changed and had Unown letters. “You know, I can"t figure out why this keeps changing…” he sighed. At this point, the paper said “BUUUURN”, as if it were teasing the protagonists.
“This paper likes to be a wise guy…” Ivaan made an annoyed face while saying that, turning around quickly to the Moltres who had gotten closer. “Water Pulse!” he yelled as he blasted a sphere of glowing water from his hands, and it twirled towards the Moltres.
The Moltres was evidently hostile this time. It sent forth a Flamethrower of great power, which simply evaporated the Water Pulse and kept going. Ivaan repeated the attack, but this time, there was a multitude of them. Char jumped over the Moltres, and yelled out: “Hyado!”, and the Ice Beam attack bursted from his outstreched palm that was held downwards. Moltres twirled far to his left and the Water Pulses and Hyado spell collided, making what was a miniature glacier. The glacier was imbued with Psychic power and started moving, as Kori had turned into an Espeon. It flew up and headed for Moltres. Nick decided to quickly hit or get Moltres"s attention away by flinging his arm up when Moltres looked to see the glacier; the Stone Edge attack rised up and hit Moltres under the “very super-effective” weakness circumstance. Moltres was flung upwards, and the glacier appeared right under it, rocketing upwards. The Moltres increased the temperature in its tailflame and tried to literally Tail Whip the glacier, which melted it fast. Rai had gotten behind Moltres in that time and used Thundershock, which was quite stronger than when fighting Zapdos. Moltres quickly tipped its head backwards, as that was where the Thundershock had been aimed. In a quick time, Char had flung what seemed to be a steel knife at the Moltres"s right wing. Kori has also changed into Glaceon and begun shooting icicle spears at the Moltres. (Ironically, Glaceon can"t learn Icicle Spear.) Rai had shot several Thundershocks at the Moltres, whilst Nick had the Stone Edge flinging up again, and Ivaan creating more Water Pulses. Moltres was trapped in the rushing whirlwind of attacks, and was struck by them all. Moltres fell through the smoke, as a warp appeared on the ground. “Alright, I"m going in!” Char yelled as he jumped in the wap before the Moltres got there. The group nodded at basically the same time towards each other, and decided to follow…

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Name: Nick
Pokemon: Charizard
Attacks: Flame-Thrower, Dragon Claw, Heat Wave, Surf
Personality: Friendly. Couragous, And Brave.
Bio: Parents were murdered… Rest unown… He loses a letter :P

How many people were on when I posted this?
Good timing.

Now, as for Nick… I actually think he’d be perfect to lose the letter, sorta. I guess you could say he joins the fanfic in the actual crisis part later on.

APPROVED

Name:Tounga
Pokemon:Lickilicky
Attacks:Power Whip,Explosion,Flamethrower,Icebeam
Personality:Supporting,Loves eating
Bio: Parents died due to pokerus, thus he keeps a orb on his neck(liek a necklace). It is said to increase his powerz.

Pokerus is good for you, isn’t it? How does it kill them? .-.

Here’s a better banner… Urs sucks XD (No offense.)

Made this myself.

You did a fail job at pasting the pic on, though. I’D do it better. If my COMP was workin’. Plus, the banner is rather big. I’d classify that as a title page, myself. Also, did you just yank that background off Google Images? Then don’t take credit if it is. Since less the half the pic is yours.

…And I’ll agree with you. Plip’s banner is LQ.

And here’s mine Plip~

Name: Rai
Pokemon: Elekid
Attacks: Thunder Pawnch! Tackle. Leer. And…Thundershock.
Personality: Rai is usually serious. However, during some times he attempts to cheer others up and act silly. (And failing at it.) He never seems depressed, even when things are at their worst. This is do to the fact his heart hardened a long time ago.
Bio: Rai has grown up from a normal life for Elekid. His family would stick him with alot of chores when he was younger, so he is fairly skilled at multiple things. However, not battle. In battle he is rather hesitant, unless he blocks out almost all other thoughts. This is extremely hard due to his low attention span. He’s slowly getting better at fighting, but often blanks out during battle. Also, for some reason he rubs his feet daily.

That background is copyrighted, Power. Also the Eevee pasting… lols for a second

So, let’s review Kysen’s ad…

You did a fail job at pasting the pic on, though. I’D do it better. If my COMP was workin’. Plus, the banner is rather big. I’d classify that as a title page, myself. Also, did you just yank that background off Google Images? Then don’t take credit if it is. Since less the half the pic is yours.

…And I’ll agree with you. Plip’s banner is LQ.

And here’s mine Plip~

Name: Rai
Pokemon: Elekid
Attacks: Thunder Pawnch! Tackle. Leer. And…Thundershock.
Personality: Rai is usually serious. However, during some times he attempts to cheer others up and act silly. (And failing at it.) He never seems depressed, even when things are at their worst. This is do to the fact his heart hardened a long time ago.
Bio: Rai has grown up from a normal life for Elekid. His family would stick him with alot of chores when he was younger, so he is fairly skilled at multiple things. However, not battle. In battle he is rather hesitant, unless he blocks out almost all other thoughts. This is extremely hard due to his low attention span. He’s slowly getting better at fighting, but often blanks out during battle. Also, for some reason he rubs his feet daily.[/quote]
Yes, that is an acceptable ad, Kysen.
ACCEPTED

Yeah, I know my banner sucks. There’s a good reason for that though .-.
Makes better banner
This one’s much better. T_T

You gonna write something? XD

Not until I have one last app in.

Yaaay, my turns X3

Name: Ivaan
Pokemon: Buizel
Attacks: Water Pulse, Aqua Jet, Aqua Tail, Ice Punch.
Personality: Shy, only shows his bubbly side around those he trusts extremely well.
Bio: Lives near an ocean, and swims out into it every day, giving him overall better strength. Not much is known about him on a personal level, however. In a battle, he makes very quick calculated decisions to achieve the highest damage possible. He’s always seen with an Everstone, and may be seen with a guitar, which he apparently taught himself to play.

IVA–…
I will take this app as acceptable.
ACCEPTED

Now, I can start.

:O Zoh-My-Goodness! Your starting?!

Oh my Gosh! Oh my Gosh! Oh my Gosh! (Parody of Sunflora from PMD2)

I can’t wait to read it, Plippy~ ^^

Name: Drift

Gender: Male

Pokemon: Dragonair (May evolve later on i’ll PM you when i want to, lol)

Personality: A very calm dragonair and always makes jokes to cheer and encourage them to cheer them up! HE is quiet dangerous when in a fight

Moves:
Draco Meteor
Hyper Beam
Outrage
Extreme Speed

Bio:

When he was just a young dratini he lost his parents and all hes got for a reminder is just a little Bluish-white orb it is said to boost his stats sharply and gain more exp. When he evolved the orb became bigger and so did his stats! Now he is travelling the world with his friends!

Drift, I’ll advise you to tpye it more clearly. Hard to understand (Yes, I did say I was going to be strict on apps here).

Lemme get this straight…

Name: Drift

Gender: Male

Pokemon: Dragonair
Personality: A very calm Dragonair, and always makes jokes to cheer and encourages them (Who is them?) to cheer them up! He is quite dangerous when in a fight.

Moves:
Draco Meteor
Hyper Beam
Outrage
Extreme Speed

Bio:

When he was just a young Dratini, he lost his parents. and All he’s got for a reminder is just a little Bluish-white orb. It is said to boost his stats sharply and cause him to gain more exp. When he evolved the orb became bigger and so did his stats! Now he is travelling the world with his friends!

BTW, Prolouge finished.

Guh, sorry. I’ma double post.

CHAPTER 1 HAS BEEN FINISHED. Now, I expect someone to comment, or else you may make me triple posteh ;~;

Comments

Good work, Plipsta. Keep working on it, and don’t slow down if you get the BSoD. :/

But “Eon”? Seriously?

Yeah, I took the name your girlfriend suggested. x3

IT WILL NOW HAUNT YOU FOR THE REST OF THE FIC.
Anyway, let’s see what the paper says… oooh. Works on Chapter 2

You seriously used it…? Stop stealing my suggestions plipsta.

I didn’t steal it. You suggested it. I used it. So there. :3

Chapter 2 is done, and it’s a quite long read. Enjoy~ ^^