Dreams and Hope with Lyrics from PMD: Gates to Infinty

Hello guys,
I like singing and talking. Of course, I love music more then anything. I decided to do something risky and add Lyrics to Gates to Infinity"s “Dreams and Hope”. I really hope you enjoy. Any feedback is wanted.

https://soundcloud.com/illusdark8/dream … ith-lyrics

Thanks Erlade for posting the Lyrics. Here"s the Lyrics to the song.

:.Dreams And Hope:.
“When we start to dream, when we start to hope~
Hope for love;
We often give up,
Often just forget of our touch,
Sometimes things, they can last forever (stretch)
Yet they fade out in the moment
And it seems that we forget that we have our hopes and our dreams (pause) yeah
We can not forget, we can not collect this worlds hate.
Leave it all to rest,
We can not forgive of our fate
In a world, where there may not be just a simple solution
We must work, work together and find the answers inside”

That…was beautiful. Keep it up~

Thank you.

:.Dreams And Hope:.
“When we start to dream, when we start to hope~
Hope for the;
We often give up,
Often just forget of our touch,
Sometimes things, they can last forever (stretch)
Yet they fade out in the moment
And it seems that we forget that we have our hopes and dreams (pause) yeah
We can not forget we, can not colet this worlds pace
Leave it all to rest,
We can not forgive of our fails
In a world, where there may not be just a simple solution
We must work, work together and find the answers insiddde”

(1: 54) Amazing work, Illus. It’s very touching. Lol, it was actually a great idea to incorporate your voice with PMD music. Kudos to you! ^-^

Fixed up for you :D
Thanks, Erlade
It means alot.

Illus that was cool
i would never have the guts to do that

Thank you.
I’m sure you could do it, you just have to stay strong and believe in yourself.

For those who are interested, I added the YouTube version of the song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=raGsKrz4HOw

I believe I’m the first person to sing and add lyrics to any VGM to Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Gates to Infinity.

I love that song, it reminds me of such very things in life. :la:
Love it Illus, make more! o: I love PMD songs so much.

Here’s what brentalfloss had to say:

brentalfloss: It’s a decently set lyric, but I have some thoughts that may help you with either revisions to this lyric or future lyrics.

  1. You might consider having a girl sing this. Either that or kinda back off with your vocals, you’re putting a rock ballad amount of effort into it, and the backing track is just “soft orchestral ballad” … also your voice could use a little more reverb.
  2. “That we forget that” is set weirdly… it’s not a good idea to end a distinct musical phrase with a connecting word.
  3. “Work together in” has the same problem.
  4. Do these lyrics have anything to do with the game? Maybe it’s because I haven’t played the game, but like… I don’t know ANYTHING about the game after listening to two minutes of your lyrics.
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